Thu 24 Jul 2008
Writing fiction on trains
Posted by sandi under fiction writing
[9] Comments
I can’t think of anyplace I’d rather write than on a train. In fact, if I were rich, I think I would just ride back and forth all day long, typing away, pausing to look out the window at the scenery rushing past.
My friend Louise was asking me why train cars make such good offices–and I really couldn’t tell her for sure. Maybe it has something to do with all that clickety-clackety forward motion that makes the plot of a novel seem that it could also zoom right along.
Most likely, though, for me, it’s the fact that I am forced to sit in one seat for a period of time with my fingers on the keyboard. Left staring at a blank screen for some time, I find that words eventually come pouring forth. And by the time I get to where I’m going, I don’t want to get off. I need to keep writing.
All this is by way of saying that today I went to New York for the day, which meant that I had three glorious hours of train-writing. I wrote an argument between a mother and daughter, a description of a cross-country trip for a just-married couple, and a sex scene.
Just want to say: interesting to write a sex scene while multitudes gather around. At one point, I was typing faster and faster, probably breathing fast, when a woman watching me leaned over and said, “You must really like your work. You look so happy!”
Yeah.











July 25th, 2008 at 10:09 am
Train-writing sounds delightful, although I’ve never had the pleasure of trying it. I think there’s much to be said for being stuck in a seat for a while. Flying should have the same effect, except it’s so uncomfortable, and there’s always that slight uneasiness about one’s safety.
I’m glad you had a productive ride
July 25th, 2008 at 2:37 pm
I always think of trains as being part of a romantic era. I can imagine that it would bring out the best in you.
Although the only time I’ve ever been on one was a nightmare trip with a toddler. I like to block that out and focus on the romantic thought though…
July 26th, 2008 at 9:58 pm
Becca, you are so right! When you’re on an airplane, you’re constantly having to do your bit to keep the plane upright, either through gripping the arm rests or actual bargaining with the higher powers. Trains don’t ask as much of you.
Susan, NOTHING is worse than a nightmare train trip with a toddler, unless perhaps it’s being on an airplane with one! I think one of the things that makes trains so lovely to write on is the scenery that is flashing past. And, yes, that IS such a romantic thing!
July 28th, 2008 at 12:36 pm
From a conductor:
I’ve been meaning to write about all the couples I’ve caught “in the act” on my late night trains. My blog, however:
http://bobbyderailed.blogspot.com
is rated PG, and there are only so many euphamisms I can use without sounding silly. Maybe I’ll write under a pseudonym.
July 28th, 2008 at 7:37 pm
I was just in Salt Lake City and rode their great new train called The Front Runner. It goes from where my sister lives in the northern suburbs to downtown Salt Lake — and it has tables, plug-ins and WiFi! My daughter and I took the train to do touristy things with my sister and her family but what I really wanted to do was get on with my laptop and keep riding back and forth all day long. I said this to my sister — but I don’t think she got it. I know you do!
July 28th, 2008 at 10:11 pm
Bobby, why is this stuff never happening when *I’m* on the train? The most I ever see is people talking on their cell phones or writing on laptops! I would LOVE to read anything you have on this subject…euphemism or not! I’m sure it would be hilarious.
Nancy, those are the trains of my dreams. Tables, plug-ins and WiFi! I’d ride back and forth all year long. Think how productive we’d be, particularly if the WiFi ever broke. Thank you for writing!
August 10th, 2008 at 3:34 pm
I love it! I’ve never tried writing on a train — haven’t really spent much time on them at all, really. But hubs and I have been talking about a possible train trip in our future, so maybe I’ll give it a try.
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