Fri 16 Mar 2007
Page 123
Posted by sandi under weather, writing
[9] Comments
Somehow I didn’t get the memo about winter coming back. This nor’easter caught me completely by surprise, especially since we’d been having what you might have to call the first stirrings of spring. Until now, that is. Spring has been run right out of town, in favor of 24 hours of snow and sleet and ice and freezing rain, with more on the way.
But this is good for people who aren’t supposed to be outside anyway. We can put a pot of tea on, light the candles, and write.
Today I found this on Distraction No. 99, and I decided I’d like to play, too.
Turn to page 123 in your work-in-progress. (If you haven’t gotten to page 123 yet, then turn to page 23. If you haven’t gotten there yet, then get busy and write page 23.) Count down four sentences and then instead of just the fifth sentence, give us the whole paragraph.
So here goes: Page 123 of my novel, the paragraph with the fifth sentence in it. (I’d love to see everybody’s page 123!)
He thought about it for a moment, and she could see, in that transparent way of children, how he was working hard to pull himself together. He knew now that she couldn’t save him, that she was useless—even worse than useless. She was somebody that he had to work to save, to allow her her little delusions that things were going to be all right. She saw it in his eyes, that he had resolutely decided to go along with the cheerful tone. He kept hold of her thumb and ran his hand in circles around it, just like where a ring would go. Then he swallowed—that swallow nearly killed her—and said in the bravest voice he had, “Well, are you going to stay here with me until I have to go on the airplane?”
Want to see some other page 123′s? There are a lot of sites doing this, and they’re all wonderful. Visit Counterbalance and Loud Solitude
and Edward Champion.











March 17th, 2007 at 9:32 am
Okay, I’ll play. But since I’m 23 pages shy of page 123, I’m taking my paragraph from page 23 of my WIP:
“Jesus, Mother, he hasn’t been my Ralph for 15 years. But yes, that Ralph.” I paused. “Well, he’s dead, and it looks like he may have been shot with a .22 and Tom found a gun in my car, and now he’s taking me to the police station for some sort of interrogation and he suggested that I give you a call. Nice of him, wasn’t it?” The sarcasm dripped off my lips, and from the way Tom pursed his, it had not gone unnoticed.
March 18th, 2007 at 11:23 pm
Okay, okay:
“Maybe she’s a woman scorned—I asked around at the paper a little, and she and the daughter moved here alone. Divorced, I gather, and fairly recently. Maybe she’s just getting her own back for something someone else did to her. Or maybe she’s out to make a name for herself as a hot crime reporter. You’re her ticket to a career, you know—she moves to a new town, takes a pissant job with the dinky local fishwrap, and suddenly she’s a celebrity, thanks to what happened to you.”
March 19th, 2007 at 1:00 am
I’ll play, but I need a moment (maybe a few weeks!) to gather my wits together and get my pages all numbered consecutively. I see you’re willing to wait, however! xo, L
March 19th, 2007 at 7:52 am
How about page 23? I doubt this mss will be 123 pages since it’s poetry. And I’ll give you a sentences/a few lines instead of a paragraph:
Gone is my notion that each life
eases into the world as one stream slips
into another, waters meeting harmoniously.
March 19th, 2007 at 7:56 pm
“Well.” I cleared my throat. “I wanted to tell you about my…friend.” My own choice of words surprised me at first, but then seemed right. I waited for my mother to interrupt me. She didn’t. “His name is… Silas,” I said, “but I call him Cowboy.”
March 19th, 2007 at 9:06 pm
Oh, I love these so much. They make me want to read the whole book(s). Bloglily, I’ll keep watching for yours–take as long as you need. This is so much fun.
March 20th, 2007 at 2:50 am
My response will go up tomorrow on FictionScribe. Fun stuff.
Also, your link to Distraction has an extra h to it won’t work.
March 20th, 2007 at 7:37 am
Oooh, thank you, JM. I went and fixed the link, so now you can get to Distraction No. 99. I can’t wait to see your page on Fiction Scribe. I’ll be over tomorrow!
March 20th, 2007 at 8:23 am
How wonderful! I’m glad you found me and the meme. I had fun with it, too.
Sandi, yours leaves me on quite a little cliffhanger… what will happen? I will have to read the book to find out.
I love games like this.